For this assignment I read chapter 8 of They Say I say and underlined all the connected parts of my own essay. I used yellow for repetition, green for key terms, blue for pointing terms and pink for transition. I noticed that I was very repetitive with the words Art and science and I should probably try to cut back a little bit on those words. To make my essay stronger I think I should add more pointing terms, key terms and transition terms to make my essay better. Adding more transition terms will make my paper have a better flow and make the transition from topic to topic smoother. Adding more pointing terms and key terms will make my paper more clear and really show the reader the main topic of my essay.
